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Journal Entry: Mon Aug 17, 2015, 8:45 PM
  • Mood: Pain
  • Watching: Destination Truth on Netflix
  • Drinking: Mountain Dew: Code Red
Skin by TMNT-Raph-fan




So I have decided to do story commishes since I need a little cash flow since I'm not going to college for medical reasons. My grandmother said that as long as I am stay home, I need to do something to generate my own money. The price is $5 USD per page up to 5 pages. Pay me through PayPal at animeluver8@gmail.com. I will do pretty much anything you ask as long as you provide a plot, characters, and character descriptions. If you also want to donate to me, I won't say no^^;

It was a month after your parents had left. You came back into the lair from your school and went into your room. You dropped your bookbag and took your clothes off. You deactivated the new human watch that Donnie had made for you and put on some slightly bigger clothes that April had bought for you to were when you are in your mutated form. You stretched slightly before leaving your room to go see Donnie in his lab.

"Yes, (y/n,)?" Donne asked, not looking up from his work.

"I'll go buy you two of your favorite pizzas after i get done training if you do my homework for me," you said as you put your hands on your hips.

"This can wait. Where is your bookbag?" Donnie asked as he looked away from his project to you.

"My room on the floor at the foot of my bed," you said as you walked out of the lab to the dojo.

You saw Master Splinter in the dojo meditating while he waited for you.

"You need to do your own homework, (y/n)," Splinter said as you tried to sneak by him to get a weapon off the wall.

"To be honest, Sensei. It's nearly impossible. I mean between training and school, I barely have time to eat," You said as Splinter stood up and looked to you.

"This is true. I will think more on the matter. Are you ready?" Splinter asked as he pulled a set of oddly shaped fans off the wall.

"Sensei?" you asked as he handed them to you.

"These weapons are yours. Your training today will be learning how to use them," Splinter said simply.

"Wow," You said as you took them greatfully.

"Now, begin," Splinter commanded as you and him went head to head with each other.

You trained with Splinter for hours until he let you have a water break. You closed your tessen and drank some water as Leo walked into the dojo.

"Welcome, my son," Splinter said

"Evening, Sensei," Leo said with a bow.

"Leo?" you asked as you raised an 'eyebrow'.

"Why don't the two of you spar while I observe?" Splinter said as you and Leo bowed to him and the rest of the crew walked into the dojo.

"What's going on?" Raph asked, watching you carefully as you and leo walked to opposite sides of the room.

"It looks like they are going to spar," Donnie said as the group kneeled on either side of Splinter.

"Dang," Casey said as he watched Leo pull out his katanas.

Suddenly, Leo lunged for you. You opened up one of your fans and swiped it at his blades, knocking his blow to the side. You and Leo went at it for nearly an hour. He tried to disarm you. You were both down to one weapon each. Finally, you tackled him to the ground and pinned the hand that still hand a katana and held your other fan to his throat.

"Dude," Mikey said, stunned as you helped Leo up.

"That was awesome!" Raph said as he hugged you excitedly.

"You are coming along well in your training, (Y/n)," Splinter said as he walked over to you and Raph.

"Thank you, Sensei," you said as you bowed to Splinter.

"I saw we celebrate with pizza!!!" Mikey yelled as he jumped up and the others started chattering excitedly.

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Raph helped you through the manhole cover closest to your house. You walked back to your apartment and found a note on the door.

'Worthless slut. We moved the day after you vanished. If you see this you have until the end of the month to get your shit. We've cut off your phone and destroyed your laptop. Whether or not you want to go to school is not our problem. We don't care about you and never have.'

Your eyes teared up as you crumpled the note. You pulled the t-phone out of your pocket that Raph had given you. You started sobbing as you dialed his number.

"Sweetness?" Raph's voice asked from the other end when he heard you sobbing.

"M-My parents. They left. I have nowhere to go," You sobbed as you fell to your knees.

"Me and my brothers will be there in a few minutes. Start packing your bags. You're coming down here with us," Raph's voice growled on the other end of the line.

"S-see you, Raphie," You mumbled before you hung up.

You numbly went and packed up your bras and underwear as well as whatever toiletries your parents left. You left your window open for Raph, his brothers, and April. When they arrived, Raphed pulled you in a hug and let you sob against his plastron. Mikey just looked around while Leo, April, and Donnie packed up the rest of your things. Raph just scooped you up in his arms Mikey, Leo, and Donnie carried what little bags you had into the sewers.

"Thanks, guys," You muttered to the guys and April.

"Oh it's ok. You're one of us now. We take care of our own," Mikey said happily as he smiled at you.

"Thanks, Mikey," You said as Raph carried you and you wiped away your tears.

"No prob, dudette," Mikey said as Raph carried you into the lair.

"(y/n)? did you not want to return home?" Splinter asked.

"Her parents left her with nothing," Leo said quietly.

"Ah. You are more than welcome to live here with us. You'll have to share a room with Raphael until we get the spare room fixed up for you," Splinter said with a fatherly smile and you climbed out of Raph's arms.

"Thank you, Sensei," you cried before you suddenly hugged him.

"It will be ok, (y/n)," Splinter said as he uncertainly patted your head, trying to be a father figure to you.

"I-I'm sorry, Sensei," You said sadly as you pulled away from the hug, wiping your tears away.

"Go rest. You need your strength," Splinter said as Raph picked you up.

You curled up against his plastron and drifted off to sleep as Raph carried you to his room.
You were motionless in shock after you dropped the mirror. Raph came and hugged you in his tight embrace. Splinter came into the room to see why you screamed and his eyes saddened as he remembered what happened to Karai, his own daughter.

"What am I going to do now?" You sobbed into Raph's shoulder.

"I can make you some retromutagen, but it would take months to make," Donnie said.

"I just want to finish high school. I don't care about the mutagen. I just need something so I can go to school and finish up," you begged with big puppy eyes.

"I have been developing a watch at Raph's request. It can turn you human as long as you have it activated," Donnie explained

"Why would you need such a device, my son?" Splinter asked Raph.

"I wanted to be able to take her out on real dates," Raph muttered as April walked in with some of her clothes.

"Uh," April said, throughly confused.

"I'll explain later," Donnie told her. "Can (y/n) borrow your clothes?"

"Um sure," April said with a thoroughly weirded out look as she passed the outfit to Donnie before he passed you something that looked like a rolex.

"We'll give you some privacy," Splinter said as he ushered everyone out of the lab and closed the doors.

You closed your eyes and activated the watch. You felt a painful tingling sensation all over your body. You cracked open one eyes and nearly squealed when you saw that you were human. You squeezed into April's clothes.

'Damn this girl needs to eat,' you thought to yourself as you squeezed into the shorts.

You took a deep breath before you opened the lab door and walked into the main room of the lair. Raph let out a wolf whistle as he wrapped his strong arms around your waist.

"Thanks, Donnie," You said gratefully with a smile.

"It's no problem. I'll make a more feminine version for you," Donnie said.

"I think you need to go home," Leo mentioned.

"Yeah. You've been here passed out for three days!" Mikey yelled as you went still.

"Oh shit. My parents are gonna kill me," you said as Raph scooped you up in his arms and ran from the lair.
~.:Raph's pov:.~

"NO!!!!!!" I yelled in horror as I watched her plunge into the mutagen.

I snarled in anger and lunged head first into the Shredder's chest like a football player. I slammed him into the nearest wall as hard as I could. I started punching him in his stupid chestplate, denting it and making my hands bleed. Donnie fought his way over to the control panel and kicked Stockman-Fly away from it as we could see (Y/n) finish mutating. He pressed the controls to open the bottom door of the vat. (Y/n) landed on the net covered in mutagen. I landed a heavy blow against the Shredder's helmet, cracking it slightly and dazing him.

"We gotta get out of here!!" Leo yelled as he grabbed the sai that I threw from where it embedded itself into the wall and I jumped over to the net where (y/n) was laying passed out and covered in mutagen.

"Michelangelo!" Splinter shouted.

"On it!" Mikey said before he threw smoke bombs to give us the chance to escape.

A few minutes later, I ran into the lair and into Donnie's lab as Donnie followed behind me. I laid (y/n) on the medical table he kept in the lab. We both worked to clean the mutagen off of her and we were both stunned to see that she looked like us, except in a female body. She was still pretty cut up and I was beat up myself. I gave Donnie what he asked for until the pain of my wounds started kicking in. He helped me up and pushed me out the door.

"Go. Let Leo and April tend to you. I can't work on both of you. Some of the cuts she got from Shredder are pretty deep and I have to sew them up," Donnie said.

"I'm not leaving her side," I said as I stumbled and gripped the door to force my way back inside.

"You know she wouldn't want you to keep suffering for her sake. She'd want you to get your wounds taken care of and you know that, so will you do it for her?" Donnie countered, dealing a blow that hurt worse than any of the blows I got from Shredder.

"Fine," I said with a defeated sigh as I sauntered to the couch to get the minor cuts and bruises I had patched up.

~Three days later~

A piercing scream rent the air and echoed throughout the lair. I rushed into the lab and saw (y/n) sitting on the side of the table and a shattered mirror at her feet.

Should i write a second and probably better written story for my character Elizabeth (she may or may not find another man to fall in love with) 

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hey guys

Journal Entry: Mon Aug 17, 2015, 8:45 PM
  • Mood: Pain
  • Watching: Destination Truth on Netflix
  • Drinking: Mountain Dew: Code Red
Skin by TMNT-Raph-fan




So I have decided to do story commishes since I need a little cash flow since I'm not going to college for medical reasons. My grandmother said that as long as I am stay home, I need to do something to generate my own money. The price is $5 USD per page up to 5 pages. Pay me through PayPal at animeluver8@gmail.com. I will do pretty much anything you ask as long as you provide a plot, characters, and character descriptions. If you also want to donate to me, I won't say no^^;

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Should i write a second and probably better written story for my character Elizabeth (she may or may not find another man to fall in love with) 

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AKIV707 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015   Digital Artist
Thanks for the point! :D
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Primordial-Goddess96 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
i was so close to the albino llama, i figured i might as well give out a trade
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Golden-Flute Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!  Thanks for the :+devwatch::D
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Primordial-Goddess96 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. I saw your Percy Jackson comic on ifunny and right that I should come see the real thing
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Golden-Flute Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait, on ifunny?  Can you provide a link please, 'cause that was not posted with permission.
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Primordial-Goddess96 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i can try
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Thanks for the add
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No problem
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