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~.:Raph's pov:.~

She should have been home by now. She had texted me and said she would be a couple of hours late because she had gotten in trouble at school. That was 6 hours ago. I paced the main room of the lair, my t-phone clutched in my hand, as Leo watched me.

"She might have gone home, Raph," Leo said softly.

"No, Leo. Something's wrong. I can feel it in my shell," I said roughly before my phone buzzed with a text message.

I looked at the message, excited that it was from (y/n). My eyes widened and I went rigid as the phone slipped out of my hand and Leo jumped up from his seat.

"Raph?" Leo asked cautiously.

"Shredder took her," I breathed.

"What?" Leo asked as I picked up the phone and showed him the picture of (y/n) hanging limply over the vat of mutagen in Stockman's lab with the caption 'Give me your lives and the life of that rat, or she will be mutated'.

"He's got her in Stockman's lab. Leo, we have to go get her!" I yelled as I crushed the phone in my hand, my shouting causing Mikey to come out of the kitchen and Donnie to come out of the lab.

"Raph?" Donnie asked, noticing me shaking in anger.

"Shredder has (Y/n). He's threatening to mutate her if we don't go," Leo explained as Splinter walked into the room and walked up to me and placed a hand on my shoulder.

"We will get her back, my son," Splinter said.

"I don't want something to happen to her, Sensei. I don't want one of us getting hurt. I'm torn," I whispered sadly as Donnie went to call April and Casey.

"We will all make it out alive," Mikey said to try to comfort me.

"April and Casey will meet us there. We need to go down to Stockman's lab," Donnie said as everyone rushed to get their weapons.

"Don't worry, (y/n). We are coming to get you," I said with a growl as I started loading up on ninja stuff.
~.:your pov:.~

You were walking home from detention. You had gotten in a fight with the school whore and won. She got a warning from the principle of the school while you were slapped with detention. You had texted Raph and told him that you were going to be a couple of hours late. You walked into an alley that was thrown in shadow and pried open the manhole cover. You sat on the edge of the opening before you were suddenly pulled off the ground by your hair. You looked and saw that it was a zombie werewolf thing that was holding you up off the ground.

"She smells a lot like turtle," the mutant dog breathed as he took a whiff of your scent.

"Take her to Shredder. He has a plan for her to lure the turtles into a trap," a giant walking and talking fish said.

"No! Raph!!" You screamed before you felt a sudden pain in the back of your head.

"Hehehe. Nighty-night, girlie," the zombie dog said as your world turned black as ebony.
You and Raph had officially been dating for about two months when he suddenly decided to take you to meet his family. He carried you over his shoulder into the sewers with you kicking and screaming.

"Dammit, Raph. Put me down!" you yelled, beating on his shell.

"Are you going to try to run again?" Raph asked as he kept walking.

"No," You answered.

He put you down and you bolted for the nearest manhole cover. He chuckled slightly before he caught you before you could get ten feet. He threw you back over his shoulder and carried you through the sewers to the lair. He sat you on the couch allowing you the chance to look around.

"Homey," You noted.

"Thanks," he said before a flash of green and blue separated the two of you and you had a blade pressed to your throat.

"What the shell?" You squeaked, looking at the pissed blue masked turtle.

"Oi! Leo! That's my girl you're threatening!" Raph yelled indignantly.

"This is the girl you are always talking about?" Leo said, relaxing slightly as he looked to his brother.

"Yeah. Now get rid of the katana before I do it for ya!" Raph growled loudly as he took out his sais, glaring at his brother.

"Sorry for the scare," Leo said as he fully relaxed and sheathed his katana.

"What is Raph yelling about again?" a purple masked turtle asked as he came out of a room wearing goggles.

"Shut up, Donnie," Raph said as he sat beside you and put an arm around your shoulders.

"You must be (y/n). I'm Donnie, the smart one," Donnie said as he came over to the couch before a small explosion was heard from the room he came out of..

"Donnie!!!" a childlike orange masked turtle yelled as he came running into the room, his face covered in soot.

"Mikey!" Donnie yelled.

"Sorry, dude!" Mikey yelled before noticing you and whispering frantically to Leo. "Dude, there's a girl in the lair."

"I know, Mikey. This is (y/n). The girl Raph never shuts up about," Leo said.

"Oh. Hey," Mikey said with a grin and a wave.

"Hello," You said as you shrunk into Raph a little, extremely on edge.

"What is going on?" an accented voice asked as the four turtles stiffened.

"Master Splinter," Leo said with a respectful nod and you peeked over your shoulder to see a giant walking rat.

"Who is this?" Splinter asked, noticing you beside one of his sons.

"I-i'm (y/n)," You started, extremely nervous.

"I am Master Splinter. Are you going to keep our secret?" Splinter asked.

"She's kept the secret for 3 months, Sensei," Raph said as he pulled you close to his side.

"Then you may continue your relationship," Splinter said before walking into the dojo.

"That went well," Raph said as the turtles dispersed to do their various activities.
You were chilling on your bed when Raph suddenly texted you.

Raph: I got something to ask you

You: What is it?

Raph: I'll be there in ten. I'd like to ask my question in person.

You quickly got dressed into something that was warm. You were waiting for Raph on your fire escape when you saw him jumping across the rooftops a few blocks away. You smiled slightly when he landed beside you on the fire escape.

"Hey," he said.

"What did you want to ask me?" you asked as you climbed back into your room with him following.

"I-I was uh," Raph began, scratching the back of his head as he started blushing heavily.

"Raph?" You asked, curious about his actions.

"Be my girlfriend," Raph said as he looked into your eyes with his intoxicating green eyes.

"Sure," you answered.

"Really?" Raph asked as you laid down in your bed.

"Yeah," you said as Raph grinned as he climbed into the bed with you.

"Night, Raphie," You breathed as you fell asleep against his plastron.

"Night, (Y/n)," Raph said before he fell asleep as well.
You were on a video call with your cousin that had moved Hawai'i a few years ago. You were sad when she moved there to go to college and got a job.

"Oh, (Y/n). You have to come visit! Hawai'i is amazing! Not to mention all the hot surfers on the beaches," your cousin said with a giggle.

"Sorry, but I like someone here, cuz," you said with a dreamy sigh and a blush.

"Oh? What is he like? Tell me everything," your cousin playfully demanded.

"He has these strong muscular arms, the soul-penetrating emerald eyes, and a voice that would make any woman melt," you said with a giggle, unaware of the turtle standing on your fire escape.

"He sounds absolutely hot! You should totally go out with him," Your cousin squealed, causing you to blush brightly.

"Hold up, we only met two months ago when he saved me from some gang members. He's also snuck away from his brothers to see me," you said to calm your cousin.

"And he's the protective and rebellious type. That just adds to the sexy. What about his brothers?" your cousin said, causing you to blush redder than your turtle's mask.

"Haven't met them yet," you answered.

"Oh? Is he planning to keep you all to himself?" Your cousin asked with a smirk

"Why are you my cousin?" You asked with a playful groan, realizing you did have feelings for Raph.

"But you love me. Now how much do you like him?" Your cousin suddenly asked.

"What's that dad? You want me to go cook? I'll be right down!" You lied, thankful that you can act.

"Oh. Well, I guess I'll talk to you later," your cousin said before you cut the video feed and you looked at your window to see nothing, unknowing that your Raphie had heard everything you said.



I know that I spelled Hawai'i weird. I'm typing this on my phone and that is what autocorrect changed it to. I'm just too lazy to go back and fix it.

Should i write a second and probably better written story for my character Elizabeth (she may or may not find another man to fall in love with) 

1 deviant said yes
1 deviant said *comment*
1 deviant said no


Journal Entry: Mon Jul 13, 2015, 5:18 PM
  • Mood: Tired
  • Listening to: Ol' red by Blake Shelton
  • Playing: Minecraft
  • Drinking: Mountain Dew: Code Red
Skin by TMNT-Raph-fan

I have a couple of other stories that are non-sonic-related that are popular on my wattpad account. I'm thinking that I should put them up here and see what kind of response they get. One is a Lego Ninjago story and the other is a Tmnt (readerxRaphael) story thingNinja Flirtatious Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles I've got my fingers crossed. 

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Should i write a second and probably better written story for my character Elizabeth (she may or may not find another man to fall in love with) 

1 deviant said yes
1 deviant said *comment*
1 deviant said no



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AKIV707 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015   Digital Artist
Thanks for the point! :D
Primordial-Goddess96 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
i was so close to the albino llama, i figured i might as well give out a trade
Golden-Flute Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!  Thanks for the :+devwatch::D
Primordial-Goddess96 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. I saw your Percy Jackson comic on ifunny and right that I should come see the real thing
Golden-Flute Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait, on ifunny?  Can you provide a link please, 'cause that was not posted with permission.
Primordial-Goddess96 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i can try
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Goofy47 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for the add
Primordial-Goddess96 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem
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